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winterbadger ([personal profile] winterbadger) wrote2010-04-30 08:20 am
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30 Poems: Number 3

OK, so I said that yesterday's poem reminded me of another, and I can't even hold onto it for a day.

William Butler Yeats

Aedh wishes for the Cloths of Heaven

Had I the heavens’ embroidered cloths,
Enwrought with golden and silver light,
The blue and the dim and the dark cloths
Of night and light and the half light,
I would spread the cloths under your feet:
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;
I have spread my dreams under your feet;
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

It was used in the final episode of the third season of Ballykissangel, in a beautiful scene where the central characters are meeting on a hillside, holding a wake really, to remember a friend who has died. Each of them has something to say, a poem or a few words. And the schoolteacher, Brendan, recites this poem.

Again, Yeats' imagery is striking and evocative. His rhythm and metre are subtle, the alternate line endings are almost unnoticeable but employ subtle repetition. And I love the way that the speaker's poverty is used as an excuse for sharing something far more precious than anything money could ever buy.

It's a wonderful love poem; it's a beautiful epitaph. It's just lovely. Dammit, it makes me cry whenever I read it.

[identity profile] wcg.livejournal.com 2010-04-30 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
It's all those things, yes.

Here's a bit from Patrick Kavanaugh that has the same effect on me:

On a lonely street where old ghosts meet I see her walking, now
Away from me, so hurriedly, that reason must allow
That I had loved, not as I should, a creature made of clay
If an angel woo'd the clay he'd lose his wings
At the dawning of the day.

[identity profile] zoefruitcake.livejournal.com 2010-04-30 12:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams

I have a tiny silver box with that engraved on it. It is a beautiful poem

[identity profile] la-renardine.livejournal.com 2010-04-30 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
A beauty. I will have to check out more WBY.